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Friday, August 28, 2020

Falling down from the park (reading create task)

Hello!
Today I am going to show you my reading create task from this week!
It is called Falling down from the park but the book is called Tautoru's bird snare.
I hope you enjoy!


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2 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 3, 2020 at 1:38 PM

    Hi Cynthia, this is Mrs Beckmann.
    I really enjoyed your story about slipping off a jungle gym that was wet from the rain. I could just imagine this kind of incident happening.
    Next time, add more detail about the ambulance arriving to take you to hospital. I would like to know what your mother was feeling.
    Have you ever slipped off a jungle gym before?

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  2. AnonymousNovember 10, 2020 at 4:33 PM

    Hi Cynthia that was kind of funny and it was an interesting story but i could not really imagine it and how did you call an ambulance. maybe could you add more detail into it next time!

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